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  •  Thanks for these kind and encouraging words (1+ / 0-)
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    Angelajean. Getting something published any where in the NTY would be like a lifetime dream.  

    But, I can't even get past the first sentence without thinking the I should of started the sentence with "Yesterday" rather than break up the flow of the noun - verb motion with a temporal phrase.  Originally, I didn't even had it in.  

    Then, just as I'm about to change it another part of my brain says wait, what's the single most important part of the sentence?  President Obama!  Shouldn't that go first?  I just decided on pure intuition that putting yesterday first, getting it out of the way would have been better.  But, If I start thinking more, maybe it should go at the end?

    My point is can you imagine how painful it is to go through every sentence and phrase?  I lose my ability to concentrate on the flow of ideas if I think too much at this level.

    To make thinks worse, as I reread this post, some of these sentences are so damn long, I feel like I'm reading Goethe in the original German.  Which used to give me headaches as they pile up all these weird verb inflections at the end to the sentences.  I remember one sentence ran on for like two pages.  It must be genetic as I have some of that heritage in my blood.

    I wish some of these highly skilled English major-like  front-pagers would do community service, on occasion, by teaching us some of their high-brow learning in workshop-seminar like posts,  by taking some post like this where an aspiring author. like myself,  means well,
    and was well received (got on the rec board on a Saturday night, and survived the dead zone into Sunday afternoon) coming back twice!) but didn't quite have the skills to get to the polished level those dang front-pagers  can spin off the top of their heads without even working up a sweat, or any moaning, screaming, or hair-pulling.

    They could use a red pen and show us how a professional editor would mark it up for changes.  That's probably how a lot of them learned how to do it.  

    Whatever, thanks for cheering me up angelajean.

    Oh, as long as I'm ranting and raving and blowing off steam I'm also frustrated that I seem to have painted  myself into a tragic and terrible corner where somehow,  in a way I don't understand,  I've had six of my last seven posts get on the rec board and by some chance accident, or trickery by elfs, they were all substantive and relatively well proof read by my standards.

    So now, I have about a dozen quick "slap and claps" I want to do on trivial topics like Mitt Romney buying Boston Chicken for Thanksgiving dinner instead of having the big family celebration, but can't for fear I look trivial or silly.  

    Dang, this one of the reasons why I set up this silly anonymous HoundDog UID in the first place.  To escape my vain and perfectionist personality compulsions. Maybe I have to set up a "double super secret anonymous account someplace else" to satisfy my compulsion to just quickly take a few paragraphs from funny and amusing articles and put a quick "hook" opening paragraph, and closing kicker at the end.  I could do this dozens of times all day long and be happier.  

    But, now I may have ruined my reputation by making pretensions of being a serious writer that I actually don't have the skills to pull off without more agony, trauma, and spell checking than should be entailed in a recreational hobby.  If I like doing this kind of stuff I'd get a job and get paid for it.

    Whatever... thanks for listening Angelajean, I feel much better now, that someone knows how much suffering I've been enduring.  

     

    The means is the ends in the process of becoming. - Mahatma Gandhi

    by HoundDog on Sun Dec 02, 2012 at 12:04:05 PM PST

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    •  The front pagers, as much as I like them, (0+ / 0-)

      are not the only ones who see their work before it publishes. Someone else helps edit. But one of the joys of blogs is that the writer of the blog can use their own voice and that's part of what people reading are actually attracted to. You can over edit a piece. For example, the sentence before this one ends in a preposition. That's a big no-no in written grammar. But in spoken? No one notices. And many blogs are written like we speak. That's why some of your sentences might sound long to you. But I bet they don't sound long to everyone.

      Listen, I'm not a trained editor but I do have an English Lit background. If you ever want me to read your stuff before you publish, let me know. angelajean 4 progress at gmail . com

      You get on the Rec list enough that you're doing something right. It isn't just the subject matter... it's the way you engage the reader.

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      by angelajean on Sun Dec 02, 2012 at 12:58:00 PM PST

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