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    Dr Swig Mcjigger, cks175

    I think it would be more effective to close with the analogy, rather than open with it.

    But your intent was to provoke, and for that purpose the order of you examples does provoke more than if the order was reversed. The structure will cause some readers to ignore your message.

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